I never wish that my second post will be like this... :(
For these past days, almost everyday I had an argue with my best friend about anything. That makes me realized that we aren't as same as people think we are. But, who does?? No one is really same with another. If so, it will make her/him is a copycat...
Now, I'm trying to understand more about her and our friendship. Maybe we just feel bored about anything surround us. About work, office or even relationship.
Another deep thinking about relationship makes me always have something in my mind... -_-'
Anyway, I had my mood repaired this morning and I was ready to begin this weekday.
BANG!!!! He ruined my mood.... >.<
He said he is not mad at me for didn't come to office last saturday, but the tone of his voice is not resemble it. I know he mad.
I already sent my assignments by email last saturday, I even did my boss assignment. But he still mad at me, because he is not satisfied about the result. Even so, he was not talk to me directly.
Arrrrgggghhhhhhhhh.....!!!!!!!! It's so annoying.
If that's what happened, could he just say it to me and I'll fix it right away.
Damn, I hate him even more.
*Hoping that in the end of today I'll have my good mood back, amiiin. InsyaAllah*
hello may, im here...
ReplyDeletei'll try to make comment on ur short essay if i can say that..:D
firstly, u mentioned ur friend is her, so it mean woman, and then u changed it with he....so which one the correct??.......do u have trouble to define gender mai???.......:P
secondly,if u tried to use indirect speech like he said that he...bla bla....
u have to define the time exactly. whether that was happened in the past so u should make it past perfect.
thirdly, u didnt consistence with ur time tenses. and as i know, u dont need to use "already" in past tense, already is usually used in perfect tense.
and "I even did my boss assignment" --> i think u have to write.....i have even done my bos assignment, because did is merely use in negative sentences.
this sentence. "because he is not satisfied about the result. Even so, he was not talk to me directly"
it's contradictory sentence, i mean, he is not satisfy came before he was not talk to me , right??...
so i think u better to write : he was not satisfied about the result, even so, he didnt talk to me directly. bcoz talk is verb, that why u need aux do/did/done.
hehe, these my correction, but i dont know which one the correct either, so we can discuss bout it...
ur essay make me want to do the same, i have a blog,but never write it in english, and i'll need ur comment and correction, i'll inform u if i finish my written.
see ya...
sari
Wow... Your comment is great Sar... ^^b
ReplyDeleteI guess you make a good progress there.
I agree with you about the corrections. Thank you.
About the gender, it is different. My best friend and a person who ruined my day.
Looking forward for your writing and other comments on my next writing... ;)
May